Friday, September 4, 2009

Is this a Haiku?

David Hockney pool
September afternoon autumn
gusts pleat the surface
Posted by at

3 comments:

  1. AnonymousSeptember 4, 2009 at 10:34 AM

    yes, but why Hockney? (sorry, dont like him that much...cant control my dislike for him)

    anyway, i think it qualifies, ask your tutor as soon as you met him/her though :p - Anna

    ReplyDelete
  2. AnonymousSeptember 4, 2009 at 10:37 AM

    erm, according to the message of one of our co-students in the topic 'what is a haiku' in our forum (sorry have no time to check her name), a haiku should end with a feeling of denouement, so the question is if your try gives this impression in its final line.

    A.

    ReplyDelete
  3. AnonymousSeptember 4, 2009 at 10:39 AM

    yes, i have also an account in blogger, but its not used for some time now (im the same Anna two times, just clarifying it!)

    :p

    ReplyDelete

Subscribe to: Post Comments (Atom)