a miscounted line
mars my haiku as summer
refuses to fade
Yesterday's previous paltry attempt has too many syllables. Oh well...
Maybe this is better?
still blue pool ruffles
in a hot September wind
and autumn slips in
Goodbye From Me
6 years ago
Well I like them both and I never actually count the syllables.
ReplyDeletewhat are the rules for Haiku. I really like them and I once had a go in writing one, don't know what happened to it.
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